Wow!! this poem was so good!! i loved loved it! It was short, but so good! You are a good writer!! i especially loved the last line! Good job and keep it up!
Rach!

I think it was a great powm, but I would have changed the last line to "a box full of empty dreams" cause you will not forget them, but the dreams are now empty, hollow, shattered by him. g/j
Loretta

Hey darl a very touching piece. lot of emotion thank u for ur comment on my poem meant alot keep it up xx