Somebody Shoot Me

You seem like
a very deep
person i am
sorry to say though
some of ur poems
are sad and right to
a dangerous point
i bet u kno the
feeling of being
hurt and i loved
ur comment
but.. and if this
is to personal then
let me kno but
do u cut urself
and if so why?..
i have been down
that road kylie
and let me tell
u it leads no where
u will sit on a empty
sidewalk and stare
at the people who
don't even kno ur
there and it's sad
but true u gotta hold
even if it means putting
a mask on. And if
there is ever a time
where u need to talk
please send a comment
and i will send u
one right back
because i check them
everyday..

I like this poem and the rhyming within it, very flowing, Good job 5/5