Comments : Somebody Shoot Me

  • 18 years ago

    by Candice

    I like this poem and the rhyming within it, very flowing, Good job 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by alyssa

    You seem like
    a very deep
    person i am
    sorry to say though
    some of ur poems
    are sad and right to
    a dangerous point
    i bet u kno the
    feeling of being
    hurt and i loved
    ur comment
    but.. and if this
    is to personal then
    let me kno but
    do u cut urself
    and if so why?..
    i have been down
    that road kylie
    and let me tell
    u it leads no where
    u will sit on a empty
    sidewalk and stare
    at the people who
    don't even kno ur
    there and it's sad
    but true u gotta hold
    even if it means putting
    a mask on. And if
    there is ever a time
    where u need to talk
    please send a comment
    and i will send u
    one right back
    because i check them
    everyday..