Bleeding Heart

by Nancy   Jul 27, 2006


A gentle "Hi",
a sweet "Hello".
You passed me by,
you had to go.

My head hangs low,
afraid to see-
your beautiful face,
smiling back at me.

I climb the stairs,
to your door I walk.
A quick small question,
I just needed to talk.

But talk you didn't do,
a busy life you lead.
Looking in your eyes,
my heart to bleed.

So beautiful you are,
so precious to be.
I want you forever,
to stay with me.

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  • 18 years ago

    by SilenceBreaksTheHeart

    Hey..first of all...apparently this was a very stron poem, because they all said so ^^^ lol. Anywayz, I really loved it. It was a beautiful poem and I could really relate to it...you really portrayed your feelings beautiful. Great job.
    5.5
    Breanna

  • 18 years ago

    by Tormented

    HEY!
    I like this poem very much..its very strong.The flow was perfect!!
    5/5

    TORM

  • 18 years ago

    by Amanda

    That was a strong poem. I thought you expressed yourself really well there. The flow is good and also the structure of the poem. Keep writing. :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Driver

    Well done... i could sense a bit of anticipation in this poem... very well written and it flows nicely... thanks for the comment too..
    Driver

  • 18 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Looking in your eyes,
    my heart to bleed.

    Loved that line... Not sure what else to say but it was a strong great poem.. Good job.

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5

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