Looking in your eyes,
my heart to bleed.

Loved that line... Not sure what else to say but it was a strong great poem.. Good job.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

Well done... i could sense a bit of anticipation in this poem... very well written and it flows nicely... thanks for the comment too..
Driver

That was a strong poem. I thought you expressed yourself really well there. The flow is good and also the structure of the poem. Keep writing. :)

HEY!
I like this poem very much..its very strong.The flow was perfect!!
5/5

TORM

Hey..first of all...apparently this was a very stron poem, because they all said so ^^^ lol. Anywayz, I really loved it. It was a beautiful poem and I could really relate to it...you really portrayed your feelings beautiful. Great job.
5.5
Breanna