by Lady Nik Jul 27, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
So small, to have grown to be so big. You have the life I wish to live. Sweet, like the greatest molasses. You are that sound that comes from water in crystal glasses. Out of sight, out of mind. My best friend. |
Great emotion i could picture everything. |
OOooo its good You are like super cool (my new rolemodel is you) |
by ChaosHarbour
Really cool... |
by Megan
I like it! Keep up the good work! L8er! |
by X~Angie~X
Wow i love it. its so good. i love the whole thing.. every stanza how u ended my best friend butterfly was so cool. it had great rhythm and flow and the word choice was amazing.. ur so talented keep on writing. i will keep reading. |