Sweet, like the greatest molasses...is my fav line...it's so vivid...it's a great poem

It is pretty good not my favorite I liked your technic for it btu it is not somethign I personally would do btu Yeah keep writing.
Elisa

I like how its a happy sad poem, INDIE, for short.

Wow i love it. its so good. i love the whole thing.. every stanza how u ended my best friend butterfly was so cool. it had great rhythm and flow and the word choice was amazing.. ur so talented keep on writing. i will keep reading.
take care
angie

I like it! Keep up the good work! L8er!

Really cool...

OOooo its good You are like super cool (my new rolemodel is you)

-ten year old poet (Devin)

Great emotion i could picture everything.