by UnToLd TrUtH
This is so true! I love that you did one on labels. 5/5 |
by *Charisma*
I thougth the idea behind this poem was really great and that you did say it in a strong manner. My suggestion is to not use those same labels a lot, like punk, freak, etc...and to work on the structure so that it's easy to follow the whole way through, but it's a good poem, it just needs a little work is all! Thanks for ur nice comment about my poem/song...I love to sing em! |
Too true. Ur poem get's the point across exactly how it should. So unfair. |