She Took You Away from Me

by Gabi   Jul 27, 2006


We use to get along so great
I could tell you anything
You were my best friend
We laughed and we cried
We were always there for each other

But then...out of nowhere she came into our lives
You started acting different
You wouldn't tell me anything anymore
All you wanted to do was be with her

You stopped listening too me
You didn't care about my feelings
Every time I tried to tell you how I felt, you would just block me out

I thought we were a team
I thought you'd never leave me
But now I can see that all you really want is to just be with her

I miss the real you
You're gone and I don't know if you're ever coming back
She took you away from me

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  • 18 years ago

    by Arcane Blondie

    Good poem; it has a lot of emotion in it. The one thing I don't like about it is that there are a lot of I's, We's, You's, ect. Try rewording some lines to take a few of those kinds of words out and add in more details---- Keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by Kayla

    I love it...i went throught the same thing and i was almost cryin when i read this poem...it brings back alot of memories you kno? thankyou for writing keep it up ur really great!