I love it...i went throught the same thing and i was almost cryin when i read this poem...it brings back alot of memories you kno? thankyou for writing keep it up ur really great!

Good poem; it has a lot of emotion in it. The one thing I don't like about it is that there are a lot of I's, We's, You's, ect. Try rewording some lines to take a few of those kinds of words out and add in more details---- Keep it up