Great poem...you're a really great writer and I can definitley relate

Thats really good. I liked it a lot. And i think that the best experiences are sometimes the ones that cause the most wounds, because they truely change us, yea know? So yea, i think that just experiencing something is GREAT! I'd love for you to check out my poems!! Much love! xo

Good poem... thats pritty funnie how anthony was ur luv once... anyways chek out my other one "move on" in lost love

Hye your poem is very said

You told me you don't understand i try to transtale it for u in english.
I hope u will understand it.
Story of Love is very old.
Love says is very old.
In love people live or die
They take hurt in love or give hurts
Some times shows love, sometimes hide,
Sometimes they will kill there self. Sometimes they have killed other
Sometimes leave everything for love, sometimes leave love for others.
Lovers have pain in heart, sometimes they give hurts.
Story of love is very old.
Some know some unknown,
All of us have one story.
Sometimes it is completed or sometimes uncompleted.

I love this poem..
i know exactly how you feel.
my eyes ached when i read this
ive been in your shoes before and its a horrible feeling..
your a great writer
but cheer up hunny! i taught myself that theres better people out there! so you can too..
love lauren may

Wow this is a vey emotional poem i love is keep written hunii its great
thanks 4 comentin on ma poem
peace

Hey havent heard from u in a wile...i really wana read another poem of urs... maby a poem about someone who has came 2 ur side at the times of strife.. someone iz out there searching the same path as u... who knows maby u've already past once or twice so keep ur eyes open because u never know...

PEaCe!!
*Anthony*

Im worried 4 u kayla plz comment back

Wow I know how you feel...5/5

Yeah i dint get ur e-mail because i dint activate my hotmail thing yet..(. new msn addy)but yeah tty on msn peace
and once again this poem iz great

Another good poem!! The only suggestion I have is to change this line: 'Wanting you here beside me' to 'Wanting you here, by my side' ---I just think that would sound better, its only my opinion though. Keep writing!!!

xxEvilAngelxx

Awh, sweetie that was quite sad. The flow was a little bit awkward but still worked. The descriptions were good but could have more detail. And the emotion was clear, nice job hun. Keep it up 4/5

This was really good. Emotion was very well conveyed. The only thing I would say is when you are writing you should always capitalize where appropriate (e.g. when writing 'I'). It makes it look better.

Good job.

Wow. I've been in your shoes before honey, and this is such a good poem to describe the breaking of a heart. i loved this one, it had to have been my favorite of yours that I read. wonderfully written! 5/5

Another great poem! This is sad..but i can also relate to this one. Sometimes love sucks, and other times it can be the most wonderful thing in life. but then again, i'm only going on 16 so i have a lot of time to tell.

~Chelsea