For Your Magesty

by Wings Of Flames   Jul 27, 2006


I bow to the King and Queen,
On a throne of majestic gold,
I vow to them I do not plea,
'Tempt me this fate I hold.'

They cackle and simply push me down,
And await my final last,
I then rest my head to the floor,
Then blank of all my past,

Execution of this love,
I hold for dearest friend,
But a soul I haven't found,
Although of mine she'd lend,

Man in dark with a covered face,
Hands clasped around his tool,
Razor slices upon my neck,
It's the end of this petty fool,

Upon my knees I bowed again,
For I wished and now in death,
Upon his uprising swing,
I know this was my last of breath.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Now this was a great dark poem. Wowee-- Excellent work, Emah!

    The flow again was good, same with the rhyming, there was also some great imagry in there too. Lovely job. Keep it up, hun!

    Natalie``

  • 18 years ago

    by Arcane Blondie

    Very dark! Gave me chills and the title really caught my attention; made me want to read-I wasn't disappointed-This is an amazing write-I love the word choice and flow----5/5 Good job in the contest! =-)

  • 18 years ago

    by Tormented

    FANTASTIC poem!!!!
    Very Dark! i liked it very much!!!
    You are soo talented!!!
    Keep Up the Great work!!
    5/5

    Torm

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    "I know this was my last of breath."
    [I think you should write "I know this was my final breath"] To me it sounded better. Great poem, I liked it all the way through. Was very dark indeed. Interesting piece.

  • 18 years ago

    by Lady Vengeance

    Hey Emma! really well written. they're getting better. it makes a lot more sense to em now. Lol. really brilliant. so much talent!! Lol, you rock my world!!! Love u always.
    -Snoo

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