I really loved this poem, i can see your point clearly. cant wait to read some of your other ones^.^
latea..peace!

Hey, i really loves this one, i almost cried. u go straight to the point without wasting time and u make ur point so clear. keep it up, ur doin so well

Awsome.......so cool....where did u learn to write like that? gez awsome

Wow. keep up the good work...thats some powerful writing there

...5/5.....