You have good potential but... this just isnt showing it

Although it wasn't clear, I understand the message.

Good concept for a poem, but I do think you have to take this one back and rewrite.
Plus fix the grammatical errors.

Don't get discourage, I will be looking forward to your revisions or next poem.
Good luck

Not a good poem, cause I know you can do better than this.
Plus, please stay away from you childish act, and leave others alone, be here for poetry,
I know you like my honest advise that is why I am saying this to you.lol
looking forword for your new poems.

Beautiful poem.
The emotions/thoughts are just great.
5/5

God Bless!

I believe u can write more better than this and i know u have the talent... poem is good just keep on writing and i really appreciate god bless4/5

It's good, but it's not the best of them...it seems to me this was your first one and maybe it would look better if i hadn't read all the others first...=)
it has some grammatical mistakes, but the message seems more or less clear... i sure understand you, this happens to me a lot... already written a poem about my class, too, while my french teacher was getting boring and i had to rewrite it many times, 'till it was perfect...can't show it though, 'cause it's in portuguese and people wouldn't understand it here...maybe adding stronger expressions...
i still think your poems are great...
keep on writing always...

*isabel*