I love your poem
i gess the same thing happend to me when i was a kid

Sad poem... but its very good. i relaly like it. im sorry that happened. u have talent so keep writing 5/5
keep ur head up
angie

Very good poem. It hurts me deeply, reminds me of my sisters relationship with my dad..reminds me alot of that. Very good work, Keep it up.
Rosie.

Wow. thats really good =)
just remember that you're never alone.
and theres always someone there to listen.
take care xo =)

Wow-thats sad, but this poem is great and has a lot of emotion in it--The flow is flawless and your word choice is perfect for the poem---Keep it up 5/5 and stay strong--

It's really good great putting it together. Awesome poetry