I liked but think u should shange the ending!! SOZ!!! i really liked the rest of it!!

All i can say is
how true

I like this poem as well, you are getting greater in you every poem. You are one of the best poets here.
keep the great job and hopfully soon I will read more of your poems.take care

Everytime i read your writing it really astonishes me. and you capture such realistic things, that many people can relate too. Maddy every single time I read another piece of work it becomes my favourite. haha i jsut cant choose anymore. love Katt xox

There's onlt 1 thing i have 2 say, all so true! keep it up, 5/5
xoxo
~waiting~