Let it all go

by MadelineJayde   Jul 27, 2006


Sad eyes
tears dried
frowning lips
trying to hide
behind a smile
so sweet so dear
but to my eyes
your pain is clear
because i know this
technique all too well
your heart is hurting
and beginning to swell
your bones they hurt
so deep in your soul
and you hide it so well
most do not know
you wear a smile
each and everyday
and help people
while your're on your way
to do the things
you have to do
and get through the stuff
you have to get through
but honey let me tell you
you cant do this to you
it just cant happen
it wont do
you're just hurting youself more
you're dying inside
because it's your real feelings
you are trying to hide
just let it all go
let it be free
don't hide or be ashamed
for people to see

*this p0em is dedicated t0 a go0d friend 0f mine.. y0u kn0w wh0 y0u are ;x*

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  • 17 years ago

    by David

    So powerful. the imaginary in this was intense! was very enjoyable to read!

    i give you another 5/5. David

  • 18 years ago

    by Kaitlyn

    Awwmaddy. all your poems have a meaning. thats what i love about them.
    keep writing doll. amazing. =] katt xoxox

  • 18 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    Wow heart touching poem
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Awwwwwww,
    nice poem, you have strong words and ideas in this one, I really like it.