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by Tammie   Jul 27, 2006


Confessions and calamity
Or deceit and disappointment

Love based on a lie
Or heartbreak because of honesty

An unanswered question
Or an unwanted answer

Confliction and resolution
Or ignorance and avoidance

Spontaneous actions
Or regretted uncertainty

Harmful unknown
Or harmless predictable

Undecided
Or a wrong decision

Sometimes decisions are just too hard to make

** I put heaps of effort into the beginning part of this poem especially, and in the end i was disappointed, but thought i would put it up anyway to see what you would think. Oh and I'm not sure what category this poem should be in..? **

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I enjoyed this one, it really makes you think about the meaning behind the words, and the meaning is very true and apt. Yet another 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    This poem was your another great one, i really enjoyed it

  • 18 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    Disicions are the harderst thing to make in life! but we need to br strong and do it!

    Good poem
    Keep it up
    Thanks for the coments on my poem it means alot to me!

  • 18 years ago

    by Sorefromreality

    I liked this poem b/c it realloy made me think which i believe lots of poetry is missing lately...good job and i loved the way u broke it up...the ending wasnt as strong as it couldve been but u can work on that i think...thx for ur continued comments and i think that this is in a perfect category....life is all about decisions...
    love ya lots,
    sore

  • 18 years ago

    by Rosie

    Tammie,
    hay waz ^, nothin much here. i haven't talk 2 u in a while. so waz u been ^ 2. i'm board, o and i wanted 2 ask u did u get u'r cast off yet? i liked this poem. but of course u've always been realy good at poems i'm in the middle of writeing a poem right now well like i said u'r always good at writeing poems so i give u a 50/50!!!!!!!!

    Sign, Rosie

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