Tammie --
Hey! Overall on this poem, I had to give it a 4/5. I`m not really a fan of the non-rhyming poems, but I didn`t dock you for that. I did dock you, though, because of the flow. I just wasn`t feeling it ;; two line stanzas are complicated to read. The theme was kind of vague ;; I couldn`t tell what you were so undecisive about. I can definitely tell, though, that you put way more effort into the beginning of the poem. I had to pull out the ol` dictionary a couple of times. You`re very well spoken! You did a good job on this ;; keep it up.
Thanks so much for commenting on my poem, it meant a lot. Much appreciated.

Love Much,
Samantha Hollywood

Tammie,
hay waz ^, nothin much here. i haven't talk 2 u in a while. so waz u been ^ 2. i'm board, o and i wanted 2 ask u did u get u'r cast off yet? i liked this poem. but of course u've always been realy good at poems i'm in the middle of writeing a poem right now well like i said u'r always good at writeing poems so i give u a 50/50!!!!!!!!

Sign, Rosie

I liked this poem b/c it realloy made me think which i believe lots of poetry is missing lately...good job and i loved the way u broke it up...the ending wasnt as strong as it couldve been but u can work on that i think...thx for ur continued comments and i think that this is in a perfect category....life is all about decisions...
love ya lots,
sore

Disicions are the harderst thing to make in life! but we need to br strong and do it!

Good poem
Keep it up
Thanks for the coments on my poem it means alot to me!

This poem was your another great one, i really enjoyed it

I enjoyed this one, it really makes you think about the meaning behind the words, and the meaning is very true and apt. Yet another 5/5