Leaving You

by twisted reality   Jul 27, 2006


**This one was hard enough to write as a friend leaving to go to a different school at the end of the year. It was even more difficult to share with my friends =( If I could have some feedback, that would be great.**

Leaving you will be so hard
I know that we will be scarred.
Through the years we have grown up
Now we are about to split up.
It hurts me inside
To know that you will confide
In someone else who isn't me
But they will never be what I try to be.
I'll always be there for you
And I'll always stay true.
You are a part of me
That everyone will see.
You are my sister and friend
And we'll be that way until the end.
Don't ever let anyone take my place
Because they will never face
All the times that we've shared
Even when we never really cared.
All our memories will be locked up tight
Even all our stupid fights.
The laughs, the tears, the cries, the fears
Have built up through the years.
I'll never let us be apart
And you will always remain in my heart.

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  • 17 years ago

    by sweety89

    I'm graduating this year and have a friend i fell that way about.I really like your poem.

  • 17 years ago

    by bridgette

    I love your poem it makes me think of me & my sis....

  • 18 years ago

    by David

    For i thought it was good.

    i dont care if the sentences are short, i dont care if 'some' of the rhyming is not perfect but does anyone know of anyone that is perfect.

    this is a great poem. with lots of feeling and emotion. what a great poem needs.

    i gave you a 5/5 cause it hit something deep inside my heart. like when reading it i was experiencing it as well.

    thats an added plus. not many writters can portray stories into their poems, but you can and that is a trait you should try to use more often.

    David

  • 18 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    I had shivers off this one it was so good it reminds me of my best friend who i lost to my bf big mistake gladly though she forgave me an we are still close you will remain in her heart forever xxx alex xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    It written so well a and it comes to ur heart it sad... will this is great poems keep it up 4/5

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