Promise

by twisted reality   Jul 27, 2006


As you sit in silence,
Wondering why
I'll be your shoulder to cry on
Until your tears run dry.

When you've been hurt,
And can't believe what they've done
If you need someone to talk to
I'll be the one.

If a close friend hurts you,
And you don't understand
Remember I'm here,
I'll lend a helping hand.

Burdens are lighter when carried by two,
And I just want you to know
I'm here for you.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Yah very sweet and romantic...well i can really relate at the same time nice poem

  • 18 years ago

    by A Fallen Angel

    Good poem and it makes me feel ever so slightly jealous of friends to help carry burdens... still a great poem and one i might copy and give to my "friends" lol... may i?? 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by ! CLAIREEE.

    Awww.. this was so beautiful. I loved it !! :D

    Yeah, the length of the lines didnt bother me. It's FANTASTIC how it i now !! You put alot of effort into it. Well Done.

    :D .Take Care. .Much Love.

  • 18 years ago

    by rhiannon

    Love it you are a great writter

  • 18 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    This is really good i enjoyed reading it probably because i can relate to it and its a nice flowing shortish poem keep it up :):) xxx alex xxx (:(:

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