Sammy --
The flow of this poem is mainly what got your points docked. Some of your lines ran too long ;; and some too short. I would re-read this, and evaluate it yourself. It was kind of boring ;; make it longer, and add more detail. 4/5.
Thanks much for commenting on my poem, it meant a lot. Much appreciated.

Love Much,
Samantha Hollywood

I dunno about the length of the lines, they didnt seem to bad to me, the poem was so good, i didnt really think about the line length.
i enjoyed this poem alot, it was really good.
xxx

Sammy, very nice sentiment. Awesome talent for one so young 5/5 Loretta

Awwww! This is like uber cute! Awwww! I just aww... There's nothing more to say. =)

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

Aww this is really sweet. Everyone needs a friend like this. The flow and rhyme were perfect.
5/5

This is really good i enjoyed reading it probably because i can relate to it and its a nice flowing shortish poem keep it up :):) xxx alex xxx (:(:

Love it you are a great writter

Awww.. this was so beautiful. I loved it !! :D

Yeah, the length of the lines didnt bother me. It's FANTASTIC how it i now !! You put alot of effort into it. Well Done.

:D .Take Care. .Much Love.

Good poem and it makes me feel ever so slightly jealous of friends to help carry burdens... still a great poem and one i might copy and give to my "friends" lol... may i?? 5/5

Yah very sweet and romantic...well i can really relate at the same time nice poem