by twisted reality Jul 27, 2006
category :
Friendship, family /
best friends
**Ok. New style for Sammy lol. Just trying loads of styles, to see what I can come up with. Feedback would be greatly appreciated!** |
by Savannah
OMG i love this poem its just like how i feel right now i love the end its so meaningful |
by Tara Kay
Well done, i lied this one. It flowed ok, and was well done. |
by Sweet lig
Though lines are short or long this is still great for me, most importan it flowed well. and the message is good very expressive. keep it up! |
by Krazy
Yeah the flows a little off, but the emotion put into counters it. i really liked it. this is a great poem. i can really relate. 5/5 |
by Robie Lincer
Thats a nice poem! very sad! it didnt flow very well but it had its meaning! |