You Were Always There

by twisted reality   Jul 27, 2006


**Ok. New style for Sammy lol. Just trying loads of styles, to see what I can come up with. Feedback would be greatly appreciated!**

Whenever I needed someone to talk to
You were always there.
My eyes filled with tears, my heart filled with pain, and
You were always there.
There was no time when I had doubt
to come to you because
You were always there.
I could see in your eyes you wanted to help, and that you really cared.

Whenever I was down and blue
You were always there.
No matter my problems, are what was wrong
You were always there.
Whenever I felt like nothing matters
You were always there.

Now your gone, and I don't know what to do
I close my eyes and think of you, and how
You were always there.
It's hard to look at the pictures, and get memories of you
Can you hear me now
At night I pray, and I speak to you
I guess you were right when you told me no matter how far you were
You would always be there.
I know one day I'll see you again, but till then I have to say goodbye

Even though it hurts to hear your name, and speak of you
One thing I will always say is
You were always there.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Savannah

    OMG i love this poem its just like how i feel right now i love the end its so meaningful

  • 18 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Well done, i lied this one. It flowed ok, and was well done.
    xxxxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Though lines are short or long this is still great for me, most importan it flowed well. and the message is good very expressive. keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by Krazy

    Yeah the flows a little off, but the emotion put into counters it. i really liked it. this is a great poem. i can really relate. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    Thats a nice poem! very sad! it didnt flow very well but it had its meaning!

    keep it up!

    Thanks for the comments on my poems it means alot to me :D