Wow great job, and keep it up... i hope you have that kind of friend ship with someone because everyone deserves it

Keep it up

Bri

I liked the way The always there line stood alone but in places it threw some of the other lines off to accomodate it.
The sentiment was really sweet and heartfelt though.

Thats a nice poem! very sad! it didnt flow very well but it had its meaning!

keep it up!

Thanks for the comments on my poems it means alot to me :D

Yeah the flows a little off, but the emotion put into counters it. i really liked it. this is a great poem. i can really relate. 5/5

Though lines are short or long this is still great for me, most importan it flowed well. and the message is good very expressive. keep it up!

Well done, i lied this one. It flowed ok, and was well done.
xxxxxxx

OMG i love this poem its just like how i feel right now i love the end its so meaningful