Dead and broken deep inside
My pain never seems to subside
Insanity slowly takes over my mind.

^^I loved those lines. wow.

This was a pretty good poem. Though I did think it could have a little more added to it, but then again I do like it the way it is. I thought you used excellent vocab. A great write. Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``

Hell yehh.. thats awesome aye.. i LOVE all ya quotes, that what got me reading these.. they're awesome, ya hav some talent hun
XxX
LoNeLY. . .

You truly hve a talent
ure poems are very relatable n youre style is really good... keep writing it helps x