A lil too short
and the rhyme seemed a lil force
the poem i made i just made a choice not to rhyme, check my others and you'll see my poetry that rhyme i dont like poems that rhyme neither i was just expirementing
Nice words though
and a pretty good message
just try and put a little more heart
and let the rhymes flow themselves
dont try and make it rhyme
let it rhyme
Good job
5/5
~MF~

Not too bad.. A differnt type of love poem, so that was nice to read..

xDarkSuicidex 4.5

This is a nice one too! but very strong! its always hard to tell someone that u dont love them!!!

keep it up!