Sad but very good! I really like this one. Alot of the poems that are on my page were from my first love. It was over 7 years ago but I still love him as much as I did the first time I saw him. If you want I can give you my e-mail address and we can talk or just be friends. I'm usually pretty good at advice. I used to run an online advice collum. Just let me know. Keep up the good work.

This is a good poem, it has nice flow. thanx so much for you comment, it meant alot to me. i just posted some new poems if you would like to read them. thanx again shanik