Comments : To My Son

  • 18 years ago

    by jamee

    I absolutely love it... tons... its awesome....
    yeahh my e-mail is xx_neverforgetme_xx@yahoo.com
    e-mail me... and we can chatt..
    byeee.
    -JameeBoo

  • 18 years ago

    by ABrookeD

    I absolutely loved this poem. It's so sweet. It really shows how much you care about your son. The rhyme sceme was awesome.

    "Just me and you forever
    No one can get in our way
    And I'll be here for you
    Until my dieing day"

    ^ That was my favorite part. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by ABrookeD

    Rhyme scheme**

  • 17 years ago

    by Roxy

    That brought tears into my eyes.
    The last two sentences are just amazingly heart fulfilling.
    God bless you and your son!! =]
    Good luck with life and I hope you two do well!!
    xx Rox