She is Me...

by cindie   Jul 27, 2006


She hates this so much
She just wants to cry
She cant go on like this
She'd rather die

She cant take the pain
Its to much to bare
There's no possible way
To get him out of here

She's going crazy
Her eyes are a flood
It makes her question
Why she gave him her love

I hate this so much
I just want to cry
I cant go on like this
I'd rather die

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  • 18 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    I really liked how you switch from She to I at the end.. This poem is really strong and a great read. Great job.

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5

  • 18 years ago

    by Chelsea Sprite

    Hmm. It's good. It's a question as to what is exactly going on, but I like it. I like it a lot. Excellent work. Keep writing!

    ~~spanish367

  • 18 years ago

    by Christie

    Wow. excellent poem. =) ur emotions are so clear in this poem. this stanza stands out a lot to me:

    "She cant take the pain
    Its to much to bare
    There's no possible way
    To get him out of here"

    great work, 5/5. =)
    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Phantasmagoria

    I like the shortness in your words.

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