I want to die

by cindie   Jul 27, 2006


Sometimes i think
'I want to die'
when i am sad
and when i cry

all my life
people let me down
one by one
they made me frown

they never cared
what I felt
and when they hurt me
they felt no guilt

I used to think
'I want to die'
but then you came
into my life

you taught me how
to trust again
and now that I know
that I can

I'll never think
'I want to die'
because you came
and changed my mind

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  • 18 years ago

    by ~yOu EnVy Me ~

    I love it gurl keep writing this is a 5/5
    ;)

  • 18 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Aww very cute and sweet.. such a touching poem, even if it is a tad short.

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5

  • 18 years ago

    by Chelsea Sprite

    Wow. Powerful. Is this poem true to you? If so, I hope that I can be as lucky as you to find someone to change my mind. ;)

    ~~spanish367

  • 18 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    Hmmm.
    It lost me.
    The rhythm seemed really rough
    and some words could have been better ones.

    3/5
    from me
    ~Emah
    p.S Thanks for the comment!

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