Comments : I want to die

  • 18 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    Hmmm.
    It lost me.
    The rhythm seemed really rough
    and some words could have been better ones.

    3/5
    from me
    ~Emah
    p.S Thanks for the comment!

  • 18 years ago

    by Chelsea Sprite

    Wow. Powerful. Is this poem true to you? If so, I hope that I can be as lucky as you to find someone to change my mind. ;)

    ~~spanish367

  • 18 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Aww very cute and sweet.. such a touching poem, even if it is a tad short.

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5

  • 18 years ago

    by ~yOu EnVy Me ~

    I love it gurl keep writing this is a 5/5
    ;)