I Need You

by Norah   Jul 27, 2006


When you first talked to me,
You were just a boy,
but then i got to know you,
And I fell for you

I know it\'s like
We live in two diffrent worlds,
but I wish they would become one,
this probably sounds weird,
but it\'s how i feel

I like you, but you probably don\'t,
I know you like someone else,
because she\'s preety and beautiful
and when you compare me to her,
she\'s better, but what you see,

Isn\'t always what you get

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  • 16 years ago

    by Laura Allen

    I like that itsso true for me keep writing

  • 17 years ago

    by aUbReY mIcHeLlE

    This is a great poem and I know exactly how you feel. I was the same way with Tyler. And I totally fell for him and I know that he doesn't like me. But there's just something about him, I don't know what, but I can't get over him no matter what and he just keeps pulling me in. I feel exactly the same way.
    Love ya always
    Aubrey Shnobrey

  • 18 years ago

    by Emma Brown

    Amazing. 5.5.
    Much Love, Emz xxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Bloomed Rose

    Good job! I know EXACTLY who you're talking about! Don't worry, girl, I'm always here for you. anyways, I think the word "preety" was suposed to be pretty. But hey, not bad at all! I give you a 5/5, so I brought the "2.0" up to a "3.5"!!!!!!!!! good JOB, Double D