I love it!

That was really good. well detailed and strong, i could feel your emotion reading it. keep up the writting

I really liked this one it has alot of emotion to it and i can relate to this one as well, do you write from the heart, from experience if you don't mind me asking?

Very well written.

Unfortunately I can relate to it.

It's very deep. Very good. 5/5 I like it :D

I like your voice. You have good rhythm in all of your poems and are able to express common emotions in unique ways. You also seem to have a lot of work at a young age. You must love to write.

This is a really good poem!!! i kinda know what you mean.....its hard...but with time it will get better!! if you ever need to talk.....you can always email me.....i would love to help!
Amanda

This Poem Got To Me, I Can relate To The Pain. Well Done. Talented Writing And Well Expressed.

Awe i like this poem. again it reminds me of somethin that was going on in my life.
nicely written!
well bye!

I can relate ot this also but no in the same pain more emotional and mental abouse

Oo. Emotion. Lol. Hmm...Some of it flowed OK in some places, but in others, I thought it was horrible. No offense. I just think that you probably coul've worded it differently or spread it out more throughout the poem. Keep it up! =) 5/5

Samantha