Because the Words Hung Heavy in the Air

by sibyllene   Jul 27, 2006


Because the words hung heavy in the air
The triplet came rebounded, sounded back.
But ask, I must, if circumstance is fair,
When feelings of assurance you might lack.
Sustain me not with vain and idle hopes,
With words alone I am most lightly fed.
Cut free the brittle tangle of these ropes
And leave all but the solid truth unsaid.
A torture, yes, to brave the empty space,
And not to worry all that you might give,
But if care, at least, be in your wish to place
Speak not, and let my honor longer live.
For hearing words whose falseness counters true
Is worse, by far, than hearing none from you.

I thought I'd try my hand at some Shakespearean-style sonnets. I'm never sure about punctuation though, so if you have any pointers, let me know.

And also, i think there should be a "love" category called "confused love" or something, haha

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  • 18 years ago

    by *Daniel94*

    I really liked this poem and the name to, you r a very interesting person by the sounds of your profile. bye.

  • 18 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    Damn! I wish I could write like this. I've never mastered it, but you my dear have hit one out of the park with this little ditty.
    Take care and keep it up~Holly

  • 18 years ago

    by Twisted Heart

    Not bad, Not bad at all

    Sustain me not with vain and idle hopes,
    With words alone I am most lightly fed.
    Cut free the brittle tangle of these ropes
    And leave all but the solid truth unsaid.

    Especially liked these lines. Great write.