by Lost & Delirious Jul 27, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Tender passion escaping from brown eyes, |
This poems amazing,great work,i seriously wish i could write that well,great job! |
by Ariana
I love the creativity in this - your words are selected well and they make this piece stand out because they are so original. This piece is incredibly sad, I think the tone in here sounds like one who has given up completely. Very impressive |
by UnToLd TrUtH
This poem is really good i liked it :) |
by Megann Lee
I love your style of writtening. It's a little diffrent from other poems I have read, and frankly I love it. Each poem I have read you can, see and feel the sadness that you write about. |
Great..u should make a second...this is very sad...but sadly i know this feeling all 2 well |