Good job. but try to pick words that relate better next time... plan it out... but you still did an awsome job at getting the point across

Wow, excellent write, Gaby. You used great vocab in this, your flow was flawless. A very enjoyable read. Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``

Wow, i really love this, its a twist on those, 'i'm sad' poems that are often written. Great work, very poetic and nicely described!

Very well written. I can say that I felt there with you as I read it. 5/5 Keep it up.

Tru

You're amazing! You have so much talent-I love this poem--The word choice is phenomenal!!

5/5 Kep it up!

WOW!!!That was like absolutely AMAZING!! the vocab was very good and again the flow was PERFECT!! I Like your work i must say!!
You are a great writer!
5/5
Keep writing n Take care!

Great..u should make a second...this is very sad...but sadly i know this feeling all 2 well

I love your style of writtening. It's a little diffrent from other poems I have read, and frankly I love it. Each poem I have read you can, see and feel the sadness that you write about.

This poem is really good i liked it :)

I love the creativity in this - your words are selected well and they make this piece stand out because they are so original. This piece is incredibly sad, I think the tone in here sounds like one who has given up completely. Very impressive

Ariana

This poems amazing,great work,i seriously wish i could write that well,great job!