Sweetest Sorrow (Acrostic)

by Poetess Lana   Jul 27, 2006


Sweetest sorrow of my lies.
Wishing you were here again.
Entering my dream world just to see you.
Exiting without knowing you are there.
Trying to find a way to tell you I love you.
Exclaiming that you don't care.
Sadly running away from the pain.
Too tired to ever return again.

Singing about the pain you caused me.
Ominously creating a way out.
Ripping myself apart from the inside.
Razor sharp hurt making it all go away.
Only knowing my friends care for me.
Wanting to love you again just to be hurt...

**mmkay... this was my first acrostic so be brutal! ;-)**

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  • 17 years ago

    by Ayanda Elena

    What's there to be brutal about. It was good. You are most excellent (but I've told you that before)...

    Aya

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni

    Wonderful. I have written three acrostics in my life [I think at least...I could be wrong, may have been more] and they are difficult to write, because you have to stick with certain word patterns.

    great job! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    'Elloha--

    This was pretty good!
    I enjoyed it, Liked your vocab alot.
    I love acrostics!

    Twas well put together & seemed natural, Not forced.
    Good for a first!!

    Lisaaa.

  • 18 years ago

    by Tammie

    Woah hun, for your first acrostic, that is amazing. Your words work so well together and i love the last line. A great ending. Keep up the great work. I look forward to reading more. =]
    Tammie xo

  • 18 years ago

    by Liz

    For your first acrostic this was fantabular!! haha. I reallllly realllly liked this. 1. Because it reminded me of me.
    2. Because it was so full of emotion and all. Anddd
    3. Because I couldn't pull off an acrostic if my life depended on it.

    So yeah, this was...absolutely great. I'm jealous right about now. lol I loved it!!!

    [[ Poetess ]]

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