Damn Holly...I have no idea what to say. I guess it's good you got your feelings out, but wow...yeah I wow. Lol. I have no idea what to say! Good Job...

Wow... very emotional poem, and this character is obviously distressed, and you can definatly feel their pain through your words.. very well written, keep up the good work...5/5.. please comment on some of mine... thanks.. Kirsty Palmer xx