by celina Jul 27, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
My heart has been crashed, and maybe even bashed. |
Heh, I love it! Really let out emotions, I could feel your emotions reading this poem, nice job! 5/5! |
Wow.. this is a very emotional poem.. and was very cleverly written, it was nice and short wich meant the reader was drawn in from the beginning, and you could really feel this persons pain... keep writting. check out some of my poems... Kirsty Palmer xx |