I Am Someone

by X~Angie~X   Jul 27, 2006


In my dreams, I am someone who is not me
Someone who hides in the shadows of life
Away from all the worries and problems of the world
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I am someone who is all alone, waiting to tell my story
The world may never know me, but through my story, they will understand me
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I live in a world of tragedy and misery, but somehow I still cant learn to cope
I am someone whose story has yet to be heard
In my dreams, I am someone who is not me
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this poem I wrote when I was in 8th grade.. so please comment and tell me what you think

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  • 18 years ago

    by Chelssღ

    Your someone too mee=) XoX Luve you hunn! [Chelss`

  • 18 years ago

    by rachel

    This is a great poem. it's so deep and real. it has awesome flow and the layout is awesome too. you're an amazing poet. good job. and thanks for the comment.

    -rachel

  • 18 years ago

    by -Ѕнэ đιεđ ѕсѓεάміηĝ-

    Hey hunnie, great poem, iz awsum, love mel

  • 18 years ago

    by Arcane Blondie

    I love this poem! There is a lot of emotion in it! The only adjustment I think you could make to improve it is if you shortened the lines a bit--Great write! 5/5 Keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by manic moments

    Awww, angie. you are someone to me. 5/5

    Luv Niquee
    xoxoxoxox

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