I totally know how that is......it happened to me last summer.....its gotten worse since then! good poem!
Amanda

Wow steph! i really really liked this poem, so many of the stanzas i could relate toooo!!!! it was beautiful yet sad..i was like awwwww!!! did that really happen? cuz if it did i wanna give you a huge hugggg!!!!! I LOVE YOU!!! yayness!!!!

Wow.. This used to be like my boyfriend and I... I hope everything works out for you... I always hated fighting with him.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

This poem was good! The flow was a little ify a times, because of the length of some of the lines, but other then that it really was a great poem!!The structure nice and the topic was different!

Great job,
-AnnMarie

Hi Stephanie - your poety is captivating .... started reading one and then another then another. Words flow & feelings show. Keep up the good work! ~Tara

Oh my god... Sorry but that poem is amazing! I guess I like it so much because I can really relate to it and you use such powerful language. It has an amazing flow, rhythm... I could not fault it... Take care you are a great poet! 5/5
- Polly

Omg I love it. This remeinds me of the fight my boyfriend and I had, when he was being honest. I still haven't fully forgave him nor fully trust him yet. Your poem was really sad. I love it.

A nice poem but so sad, I hope thinks are ok with u now,
keep it up and looking forword to see ur new poems

Honestly, I feel the same way about a friendship I have...i just let a friend go because of things in the past and this poem makes me regret a little bit of it, then again it doesn't...Theres only so many times you can forgive a person until you realize, the more you forgive them, the more they will probably hurt you...once they do something wrong, they more then likely will keep doing it until THEY see their mistakes.....I loved this poem, good rhymes!

I can totally relate. You wrote this in a brilliant way and I hope you are ok. I've been through this so i know what it's like from reading the poem. Take care :)