R.I.P

by NothingGoldCanStay   Jul 27, 2006


Cry cry beautiful
Death is so fruitful
We are here for you
Stuck here like glue
We all love you
We might never have a clue
Of how it is to loose a life
But right now our minds are being stabbed by a knife
A heart ache
Does not feel great
Stay strong
These processes take long
Not all things last forever
But a mothers love ends never

*This poem is dedicated to my friend,whose mother died recently*

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  • 18 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    This was a well written poem. Very short though, I'd like to see it a little longer. The structure was not that well, perhaps breaking it into stanzas would help.

    Also the words "heart ache" is one word, so it should be "heartache"

    Over all good poem.

    Peace, Joe

  • 18 years ago

    by christina marie

    Sorry for your friend. Well written, dearest.

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