Tear

Really good:)

Eh, normally i get stuff like this, but i couldnt understand what the heck you were talking about-a little short too....non the less i got that you have been hurt, dont know how or why though-try adding something into it.

sorry-dont mean to come off as a cow.
october xx

Short, more like a quote if you ask me.

Still good, nonetheless.

^__^

I liked this poem...it was so short but got to the point and had a good flow to it. Great job.
5/5
Breanna

Wow, such a short poem yet really amazing. Its seems to say a thousand things. Keep up the great work.
I still love how you put so much emotion in it.
i love this poem 5/5