Oh my gosh this is freaking amazing,i luv this one soo much,its so true!5/5

This is truly and deeply beautiful. It really just speaks for itself. You've created, yet again, the perfect imagery here. I love reading your poetry. You are a magnificent writer. There are only two things that need editing; the first one is apostrophe's' need to be added, the second one is on the 19th line, you need to change the word know to "known". The rest is perfect. You have a wonderful gift with words my friend. Keep up the great work!

Letty