My body is aching

by Nancy   Jul 27, 2006


My body is aching,
hurting for you.
Where did you go?
What did I do?

Did you find out,
the woman who wrote-
all the beautiful poems,
those silly notes.

I need you to hold me,
your kiss on my lips.
I feel your hands,
resting on my hips.

I love you so much-
do you love me?
That question not answered,
you are married you see.

My body is longing,
my fingers to touch.
This feeling inside me,
this burning so much.

I can't stand this hurt,
can't deal with the pain.
Your hands touching me,
is driving me insane.

But again you are gone,
I'm left behind.
I'm looking through the window,
your love to find.

Soon you will be back,
you love so free.
You body so close,
deep inside of me.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Amanda

    WOW! Awesome piece of writing. I really enjoyed the way the poem drew me in. I think you did an excellent job on it. Keep writing, you have alot of talent :)

  • 18 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    This burning so much.

    [That sounds like me, lol..]

    you love so free.
    [your]

    Now, I loved this poem because it was so simple and so true.. Yet again Im not sure what else to say, but it had a great flow..

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5

  • 18 years ago

    by loretta Taylor

    Very nice. I am living that right now. Freaky,not the physical stuff but the emotional part. Thanks for comments on my message shread. I have been doing the same as you. I read probably 25 or 30 poems a day, and rate and comment on almost all of them. The only ones I don't comment on are those who obviously are not taking this seriously. And their poetry stinks, but its funny thatthey get alot of votes. I notice its alot of the same people. Teen agers mostly You did great Loretta

  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha Hollywood

    Nancy --
    I think that you did a wonderful job on this. Right before I came to r/r/c another of your poems, I read the story about Gregory and your son. I`m so sorry to hear that ;; if you ever need to talk to anyone, I`m always here for you. I may only be 13, but I`m more help than you may think. =D
    The rhyming and flow of this poem was perfect. -- and it held a lot of emotion, which is definitely important.I`m so sorry if this is non-fictional, and I hope that it works out. But if it is in fact fictional, you`re very convincing! Well done, 5/5.

    Love Much,
    Samantha Hollywood

  • 18 years ago

    by painfully here

    It was pretty good

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