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Wonderful poem, It was very sad, but great structure. You have great talent.5/5/ loretta

Nice. good flow, structure and some alliterations thrown in there too. not sure about the line in between each line tho...

-biscuit-

I liked the way this was set out, it was different but cool.
the words were so meaningful and it was a great poem, keep it up
xxxxxx

I can totally relate to this poem, sometimes you've got to take chances in life, though sometimes it's hard. I really liked the beginning of it, especially the hushed tears part, and "I've never been right".

Thanks for your comment on my poem "She Cradles Sadness", I'll take your advice when I write my next poems.

Good job! 5/5

Keep writing.

XoXo
Gaby

Interesting layout for this but it worked. You've managed to crama lot of meaning into a few words.
Different.