I loved the ending lines... A great job. Interesting format though. |
Interesting layout for this but it worked. You've managed to crama lot of meaning into a few words. |
I can totally relate to this poem, sometimes you've got to take chances in life, though sometimes it's hard. I really liked the beginning of it, especially the hushed tears part, and "I've never been right". |
by Tara Kay
I liked the way this was set out, it was different but cool. |
by Biscuit
Nice. good flow, structure and some alliterations thrown in there too. not sure about the line in between each line tho... |
Wonderful poem, It was very sad, but great structure. You have great talent.5/5/ loretta |