Oh, how sad! It portrayed your pain perfectly, the agony of living without...

I loved the last line, how it's like the pain and emotion were building up, consuming everything, and then..someone opened a door, and it all came gushing out.

Beautiful!

//T.L.//

Hey cool poem
nice to see that people are still working toward good poetry
if u dont mind, could u please rate and comment my new poem THE LITTLE THINGS YOU DO
ill be sure to return the favor once u comment and rate
thanksss :)