I strive attention

by Rosie   Jul 28, 2006


I strive attention
but only from you
I strive attention
there's nothing else I can do
I strive attention
and I know it's really sad
I strive attention
and it hurts you so very bad
I strive attention
and you do nothing but give
I strive attention
and it's the only way I live
I strive attention
way too much you see
I strive attention
and thats the reason you left me
I don't strive attention
Because I no longer live
Physically, but not mentally
Now all I do is give
It's hard now to wake up
now that you aren't here
its hard because its only been a year

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  • 18 years ago

    by Candice

    I like this poem it's very good, you did a good job on the rhyming and it really flows. 5/5