Comments : I've loved you all along.

  • 18 years ago

    by Lu

    This poem paints a very clear picture of a sad aching heart . I can feel the emotional pain flowing through each stanza as though the pain were my own .
    Wonderfully written, making the reader feel all the emotions through your words !

    Though the sarcasm in my voice
    May be hurtful and strong.
    I always want you to know is,
    I've loved you all along.
    ^^
    3rd line maybe you meant :
    I always want you to know that
    or
    What I always wanted you to know is

  • 18 years ago

    by AGirlWorthFightingFor

    I really loved this poem. It doesn't exactly tie in the title very well, but it does have many of the same themes.

    love:
    Its a black and white picture,
    A film without sound.

  • 18 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    Aww, what a beautiful poem. Your words sing loudly in pain and the poem was very tragic. The ending fit perfectly, as well as the title, I was just completely blown away as I was reading. Keep up the excellent work! xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Jason

    I checked out this awesome poem because you posted in the group. These are deep feeling that you express here. I can really relate. Remminds me of a saying "Time doesn't heal all wounds, it mearly scars them over".