by Lu
This poem paints a very clear picture of a sad aching heart . I can feel the emotional pain flowing through each stanza as though the pain were my own . |
I really loved this poem. It doesn't exactly tie in the title very well, but it does have many of the same themes. |
by Sarah Ann
Aww, what a beautiful poem. Your words sing loudly in pain and the poem was very tragic. The ending fit perfectly, as well as the title, I was just completely blown away as I was reading. Keep up the excellent work! xxx |
by Jason
I checked out this awesome poem because you posted in the group. These are deep feeling that you express here. I can really relate. Remminds me of a saying "Time doesn't heal all wounds, it mearly scars them over". |